Wednesday, 11 November 2009

Newspaper Language (etc.)

Newspapers use specific language and grammar, this establishes it as the text of a newspaper.

9 GOLDEN RULES

KISS – Keep It Short and Simple. In any newspaper, whether it be national or local, keeping sentences short and simple make for better news and it is easier to read.
Reading For Speed – Everything on a newspaper should be created for speed reading, enabling the audience to read through articles fast
Never Use 3 Words When One Will Do.
Don’t Repeat Yourself
Use Active Verbs – e.g “Youth strikes woman”
Use Puns In Headlines
Personalise The Story – make it relevant to people and places.
Categorise People – e.g Ex lover
Avoid – Overuse of clichés, euphemisms, being too chatty, foreign phrases.


GRAMMAR AND QUOTE USE
When using quotes in articles, I need to be sure to check if the quote is direct or indirect. The use of grammar in articles changes compared with usual written text. A direct quote is something somebody has actually said. These need speech marks.
Indirect quotes usually come after “ X was said to be..”. This quote may have been taken from an outside/close source.
Standard English grammar is often dropped when writing articles. This is because it makes the article easier to read and depending on the article can give a certain ‘feel’ to it.

TEXT LAYOUT
Newspaper text is always written in columns that are aligned to reach both sides of the margins, so giving an efficient look. Usually it ranges between one to three sentences per paragraph, and font size is usually around a size 8 or 10, so that it’s small enough to fit all information in.
The paragraphs are always indented to establish a different point, per paragraph. The establishing paragraph always includes “WHO, WHERE, WHEN and WHY”, this is written in short and ages are always shown after names. (Only in the first paragraph, unless introducing a new subject later on in the bulk of the information)
Text is mostly placed below or to the side of the photograph, if the article has one. It is rarely placed on top, as the headline is placed there.



TECHNICAL TERMS AND NEWSPAPER FEATURES

Box-out – A small part of the page, shaded in a different colour.

By-line – the name of the reporter.

Caption – text under the photographs explaining the image.

Crosshead – a subheading within the body of the text of an article.

Feature – not necessarily a ‘news’ item, but usually with a human-interest angle.

Headline – this is the main title of the article, usually in the largest and boldest font, describing the main story. A banner headline spans the full width of the page.

Kicker – this is a story designed to stand out from the rest of the page by the use of a different font and layout.

Lead Story – the main story on the front page.

Lure – a word or phrase directing the reader to look inside the paper at a particular story or feature.

Masthead – the masthead is the title block or logo identifying the 'brand identity' of the newspaper at the top of the front-page. Sometimes a motto is also placed within the masthead.The masthead is often set into a block of coloured print or boxed with a border; the ‘Red-tops’ (The Sun, The Mirror, The News of the World) are categorised by style and the use of a red background in the masthead. Local newspapers generally use 'calmer' colours such as blue or green.

Pugs – these are at the top left and right-hand corners of the paper and are known as the ‘ears’ of the page. The prices of the paper or the brand identity are positioned there. They are well placed to catch the reader’s eye.

Secondary Lead – this is usually only a picture and headline, it gives a sneak preview of a story that you might find inside the paper.

Sidebar – when a main feature has an additional box or boxed panel along side of it.

Spread – a story that covers more than one page.

Standfirst – this is an introductory paragraph,letter or sentence before the start of the feature.Sometimes it may be in bold.

Strapline – this is an introductory headline below the headline.

APPLICATION TO PRODUCT
Applying these concepts to my product was relatively easy, for example I used the 9 Golden Rules; "KISS" was used in each headline as it is unusual for a newspaper to use standard grammar and English.
For example: "Woman's handbag stolen in ASDA"
Generically newspapers use this ellipsis to create the concept of KISS.

Tuesday, 10 November 2009

Other Image Choices

These are the contact sheets of images that I have either discarded or used in advertisements or smaller articles in the newspaper. The highlighted yellow images are the ones that I have used and have been edited in Photoshop (brightness and contrast) to give better aesthetic quality.

1. I chose only one image out of this set of photos, due to it being a much straighter angle and appropriately corresponding to the article I have written in the newspaper.











2. I have chosen 3 images here. Firstly, I chose the first 'present' photo due to it being a clearer and brighter image. The second chandelier image was chosen because it was at a better angle compared to the others and was focused more clearly on one small part of the object. I only had one of the final image of the vase, which I felt was enough as the image is in focus and can be resized accordingly to the advert.









3. After thoroughly looking at each photo here I found that in most the inconsistency was that the angle was slightly slanted, or the shoulders were uneven. I chose this photo in particular to include the lips and the 'straighter' shoulders in order for the pearl necklace to be in main focus.

Final Newspaper Pages Production

Using all the research I conducted, I put together a final newspaper. This is my first original copy that I was initially not happy with, as some conventions did not fit my research. For example, there are gaps and the columns for each article are not aligned. This is a difficulty I came across whilst using Microsoft Publisher to create the product. In my final product, I managed to overcome this problem by adding more images, specifically with a member of the public in.
This is my final front cover. I have included all generic conventions of a newspaper on to it; such as articles, images, advertisements, masthead, barcode, date and time, price, motto and weather. In comparison to my first original copy, this front page has a much better layout and a more realistic aspect to it.

This is my final second page. Using all the research I conducted, I applied it to my final product. For example, in comparison to the front cover this page has a larger article ratio, including articles of lots of importance. The articles are also varied in terms of news values making the page interesting to read for the audience. All articles on both front cover and second page fall in line with the uses and gratifications theory.
Lizi Riley - Both pages look really realistic, I especially like the advert on the second page. There are no visible gaps which also helps the newspaper look really professional.

Image Editing Process


I edited the images that went into the newspaper only slightly, for example increasing brightness and contrast to show colour and make the image clearer. I also 'cut out' images from their backgrounds.
I used Photoshop for this process.


Hyperlinked Webpage Generic Conventions

These are the conventions I have found that apply to the hyperlinked webpages of each different Newspaper. E.g The Hereford Times (See Webpage Conventions.)





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- Homepage Masthead/Title : Same as the Homepage, keeping the house style and brand identity
- Pictures : Several pictures for the articles and advertisements, main picture for the article
- Main Linked Article - This takes up most of the hyperlinked page as it is the purpose
- Advertisements : The same as the Homepage
- Links to other stories : To give the audience other story options
- Comment Option : To give the reader the option to comment on the article
- House Style : The same as the Homepage, keeping all colours and fonts


APPLICATION TO PRODUCT
Similarly to the home page of my website, I applied each of these conventions successfully in order to create a recognisable product.

Cohesive Devices in Newspapers and Webpages

To create the hyperlinked web pages, I will also research into the differences and similarities between the web pages and the front cover of the actual newspapers.

I will look at the
Harrogate Advertiser in order to understand this. These conventions will help me to create the web pages.

SIMILARITIES
- Brand Identity and House Style
- Date and Time
- Articles
- Article Images
- Advertisements


DIFFERENCES

- Linked pages (Other sites/articles)
- Small proportion of articles, with links to the full article
- Comment Options
- Register/Sign in Options
- Scrolling Text
- Instant news updates
- Moving Images



These similarities and differences highlight the divergence between the hard print copy of the newspaper and the interactive, modern and 'instantaneous' version of the newspaper in web pages.
New media (i.e Internet) has been involved in the decline in profits of print media.

APPLICATION TO PRODUCT

Taking this into account, I aimed to create the products with exact cohesion to create a non-divergence between the products.
Due to my research in detail of the cohesive devices, it was an easy task to apply these to each of my products in order to create a precise and recognisable cohesion.

Newspaper Articles

These are the MAIN articles that I have written for the newspaper front cover and second page. Not all of my articles are included here, due to them being 'filler' articles and not main ones.

Main Article -
JAKE'S RESTAURANT RENOVATION SUCCESSTHE RESTAURANT scene in Harrogate has recently had a boom, leaving the recession a distant memory. In particular, one business, Jake’s, has caught the eye of many tourists and residents. It has also been nominated for the Plush awards. David Knowles, 45, and his wife Suzanne, 44, recently took over and renovated the stylish new restaurant. The couple bought the establishment when it was named Milan's, and have transformed it from a functional café into a sumptuous, Italian experience. The restaurant was named "Jake's" in memory of their late son, who unfortunately passed away aged 21. David said that the choice of name was not intended to be morbid, but in celebration of their son’s life. Dr. Susanne Knowles said, "The new menu is heavily influenced by our love of Italy and Italian cuisine, before we renovated Jake's the whole family would be experimenting with all sorts of different Italian recipes and foods at home." Critics have high hopes for the restaurant; some suggesting it's set to be a strong rival for Starbucks with its fresh coffee, cakes and pastries all produced on the premises by their award winning London head chef, Wendy O’Brien. The family recently held a private party for the official opening and renovation of the restaurant, also commemorating their sons birthday. The restaurant is yet to be fully refurbished but is currently open for business 7 days a week.



Article 2 - Front Cover


HARROGATE WOMAN'S HANDBAG STOLEN IN ASDAA HARROGATE woman's handbag was stolen in ASDA on Saturday afternoon. Mrs. Bellerby was doing her shopping when the incident happened around 12:15pm in the store. She was approached several times by a woman asking questions about different products of food. After the second time, Mrs Bellerby was distracted and later noticed her handbag was missing. The bag contained car keys, a mobile phone and a purse with credit cards and ten pounds cash. Sergeant Jones has said that this is not the first time the woman has stolen.“This is becoming a regular occurrence in the Harrogate area.The woman is not dangerous but may have an accomplice, so we are warning women to be vigilant and keep their handbags close.” She is described as being about 5ft2, black hair in a ponytail, of eastern European origin and with a very little knowledge of English. The police are urging anyone who may have seen the woman around Harrogate to come forward as they believe she may steal again. Alternatively, call crime stoppers on 0800 1234567.



COUNCIL INVEST IN SCHOOL CANTEEN EXTENSIONNORTH Yorkshire County Council have invested over £240,000 in constructing an extension to Harrogate Grammar School’s canteen. The extension was finished this month and is currently in use. The extension, which began at the start of June, will seat an extra 300 students (on top of the current 240) and will host another 3 serving stands for extra canteen staff. Head teacher Mr. R. Sheriff agrees that the school is in desperate need of extra space to accommodate their 1800+ students. Mr .J. Mungovin, the head of the site staff at the school, revealed his thoughts on the new construction; “We are hoping that more students will be encouraged to stay on site for their school dinners, and make good use of the new facilities.” The school recently received the Healthy Schools Award, allowing the extension of the canteen, and is already one of the most desirable schools in the country.



Main Article - 2nd page


BAH HUMBUG!CHRISTMAS IN Harrogate has always started early. Advertisements are in windows usually by early November. There have been several complaints to Harrogate Borough Council this year as to why there are shop windows with Christmas decorations already on display. Anne Woodland is one person on the Christmas Lights committee who agrees that the decorations are a little too early. “I love Christmas in Harrogate, our tree in the town centre always looks magnificent. The main shops have definitely bought Christmas forward at least a month too soon.” With Halloween and Bonfire night still to come, Christmas is definitely not ‘just around the corner.’ The run up to the holiday is always a rush, but have Harrogate made the rush come far sooner than is needed? In the economic crisis that Britain and the rest of the world is in at present, is it necessary for shops to be encouraging early Christmas present spending? Matthew Riley, 32, has recently lost his job as manager of the Printing Company that went out of business last month. “Having no job in this economic climate is definitely not where anybody wants to be. Retailers that are encouraging shoppers to start on Christmas shopping is absurd. Who can really afford to start now, we certainly can’t.” Shop managers however, such as Susan Taylor who manages Woods interiors in Harrogate, has a very different idea. “Yes we are going through an economic downturn at the moment, but what people don’t realise is retailers have to have an ongoing income also.” If you have any thoughts on early Christmas, please contact us.




106 RE-ROUTETHE 106 bus route is under debate. The public are furious with the changes to the bus route, which is supposed to improve the ‘reliability’ of the service. The route will lose many valued customers, says Dr. Ray Clare, 68. “I am outraged at the changes. I don’t have any means of transport to get in to town, the 106 bus is a vital connection for many people, especially those near Green Lane.”Dr. Clare has set up a petition which has to date over 500 names. He is hoping to gain at least another two hundred more signatures before presenting it to Harrogate Borough Council. Transdev introduced the route cuts in August, which cut out 3 major parts of the route including Green Lane, Yew Tree Lane and Rossett Green.



CAT HITCHES 30 MILE RIDE IN BACK OF VANA CAT from Harrogate was found in the back of a Toyota Maintenance van last week. Craig Ross, 50, the owner of the van, was shocked to see his elderly neighbours‘cat asleep in the back. The cat, after jumping into the back of Mr Ross’s open van, had fallen asleep and then taken over a 30 mile ride to Barnsley until Mr Ross had noticed. “I hadn’t realised until I had to stop at a service station near Barnsley, it’s a wonder nothing fell on top of her.” After discovering the cat, Mr Ross drove back to Harrogate and handed back the cat, named Bebe, to Mrs Ethel Godal, 78, of Arthurs Avenue. Mrs Godal said she ‘wasn’t surprised’ Bebe had gone missing again. “It’s a regular occurrence now, I’d seen her climb in strange places before but never thought she’d end up travelling all theway down Yorkshire.”Mrs Godal is widowed lives on her own, with 18 year old Bebe. “If I’d lost Bebe I wouldn’t know what to do. I wouldn’t be able to get another cat at all.” The adventurous cat is infamous in the neighbourhood for getting locked in garages and having several days away from home. Bebe is now safely back home with Mrs Godal.